I really like this animation! You obviously chose to make fun of Dragon's Crown because of its notoriously sexualized women (mainly the sorcerer), and how one look at the game could make people think it would look like porn. I don't think you condoned abuse, nor never intended to, but the mom is suppose to represent the audience who think the game looks over sexualized (I.e. tumblr), and the audience who enjoys the game for what it is, but gets a lot of shit for it.
The humor, lacking albeit, is exsistant, and it's something that everyone can relate to. The only thing I would ask for really is more color, with lighting on maybe the house or the characters themselves. But other than that, good work!
The voice acting could be better. But good job with everything else.
What's wrong with the voice acting?
This is really great, and I can't wait to see how this turns out if this ends up being a series. Its funny to keep reminding the audience that the character of focus is 'better than pewdiepie', but dont let this joke be the main focus of your series, or else this joke will become stale. Try using different jokes, but keep this joke to pull out maybe at the end or in later episodes.
Ok. The game looks AMAZINGLY good. I love the art style that went into this game.
Now, that being said, I do have some cons to point out. First of all, as suggest by someone else, the music is somewhat repetitive. I mean, I enjoyed the music (especially when you used Blue Scr33n for the boss fight), but there need to be more then a 1.49 minute loop. It gets very tedious when you've been on the same level for about 5 minutes. I would suggest having the creator of the music of the main menu and the first levels to add onto the tracks themselves.
Onto controls. At first, I loved the controls of the game, but after a while, I ended up frustrating myself. First, the character shouldn't slide when she's on the ground. There should be NO knockback whatsoever. Its one thing when the character gets hit and knocked back, but if she's firing her laser while on the ground, she shouldn't move at all. However, that being said, the game's controls are pretty decent. Just PLEASE fix the knockback issue while on the ground.
But other than those points, pretty ok game. :)
(p.s. You should probably add links to were these songs are available for purchase or download)
Awesome work! I really love the time and effort you put into this in order to make a sweeter sounding version. I love this work. :) can't wait to hear what you do next. :)
Thanks <3 I'm struggling with some of the others, but I'm gonna do my best regardless.
I would like this even better if the text wasn't in the middle of the picture
These are fantaboulous characters.
Bosses for a game maybe?
I like the lighting, and how you make the flames soft. I would suggest though working on your line art first, then color in the kickass details.
thanks bro!! :D i will try my best to do more better!!
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